A brilliant purpose statement doesn't just flow out of your fingertips. It takes preparation and planning. Start with some pre-writing exercises [source: Callaghan]. Pre-writing is also called "free writing," because there is no editing involved. Just start writing and see where it takes you. Use these prompts to generate ideas:
- What is the most fascinating thing about your chosen field of study?
- What was one of your most memorable achievements in your field of study? Why? How did it happen? Who helped you?
- Where do you envision yourself in 10 years? What are you doing?
Read over your answers to the pre-writing exercises and look for a unifying theme. It could be a quality that you possess -- deep curiosity, leadership, persistence, creativity -- or a recurring idea that runs through your academic and professional work.
Read the essay prompt carefully. Make sure you're clear about what is being asked. If the school asks for specific information, be sure to provide it.
Now it's time to write an outline. The unifying theme from your pre-writing exercises will become your thesis, a clear and focused statement that guides the content and structure of the essay. Then choose two or three personal experiences -- inside and outside of the classroom -- that directly support your thesis. The experiences should be unique and real, showing the personal connection you have with the subject matter and your dedication to the field. Remember to end with a conclusion that artfully ties the experiences back to the unifying theme.
When it's time to write, do so in your own voice. Don't try to impress the admissions officers with "academese" or highly technical vocabulary [source: Berkeley]. The subject of the essay is you, not the field of study. Whenever you discuss your academic or professional achievements, you need to answer the question "Why?" Why was this achievement so important to you? Why did it change you/inspire you/put you on the path to graduate school?
If all else fails, remember these rules:
- Write about something you're passionate about
- Be specific; include concrete details
- Be yourself
Once you complete a draft of your purpose statement, show it to the professor or colleague who wrote you a letter of recommendation. Use their feedback to write a second draft. Then show it to someone else you respect and write another draft until you are satisfied with the results.
One last thing: Admissions officers hate typos [source: UNC]. Have several (yes, several) friends proofread your essay for spelling and grammatical errors.
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